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I like to write...Torstai 10.02.2011 22:50

...So here's something I wrote.



Storm
War of The Gods


In the distance
war rages
burns you to to ground
and laughs at your misery

Two sides
one observer
Heaven and Hell
Humans on Earth

Storm rises
we head to cover
War starts
Light show begins

Like dog fight
It's fast and furious
Few, if none survivors
Tell the horror stories
Of people who were kidnapped from kindergarden


In the distance
War rages
Burs you to the ground
And laughs at your misery

Like Storm
It scares many
But in reality
It only takes courage

Gods of the battlefield
Units
Immortal to enemy fire
Rush give no mercy

In a blink of an eye
They look at you
No heartbeat no breath
Only one thought
Gods are we
And we are you

They rush
Like wind they pass
Trough our lines
And scare us to death

But on other hand
Reality
Is quite different
Not far away from the past

They fear like us
And feel pain like others
For real
It only takes courage

To be the man
The god
Of the battlefields
Have honor, have faith

But be warned
Since nothing lasts forever
They are only men
In fancy suits and cover

So are you



/Poem

Can you guess?
Can you guess of who was my poem about.
And please, tell your HONEST opinion of it! I can take criticism. (Lies. LIES!) Also this poem old. In my honest opinion. (cwadt?) More to come.

Please do not distribute my work without my permission. If you like to use it on/in something please ask me first, as long as it's nonprofitable and I get featured, I can almost promise you that I will allow you to use my work.

Oh, my ego! It has really grown! Thinking that someone would use my miserable work... (Fishing for empathy points..! : D)

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